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RSWells
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0 posted 2001-06-18 10:19 PM



Release us
From melancholic state
And cease thus
This diabolic wait.

Come to me,
In this time and place,
Thou knew me,
From my rhyme'd pace.
Debut we
And gaze upon the face,
That renews thee
An interest to embrace.

The time's right,
Wait not another day,
Defy fright,
Please hurry on your way
To delight,
In passion's heady sway,
For life's light
So finite, it may stray.

Surrender,
Surrender to me now,
And render,
The Love that you have vowed,
So tender,
Yet from this distance how,
Will splendor,
So sundered be allowed?

© Copyright 2001 Richard S. Wells jr. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-18 11:26 PM


Beautifully penned sir!  
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2 posted 2001-06-19 04:46 AM


Well done, and you do give "Willie" a run for his money once in a while, yes you do!  Loved the style of this one.

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~

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