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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Words oft I search great volumns of tombs of words where they have found a home explore for one, find countless more my quests take me through open doors repeatedly I search, then seek when looking for one, others peek find my mind then, a’wandering you’d think you heard words chorus sing this mind, surely, it takes no rest and oft meandering in quest to find a way, a plan, design to bring to heart, these words of mine yet these words oftimes prance around as if an inane, wayward clown leading me down streets vast, so dark language then becomes surreal, stark my mind, I admit, never rests but I know if strained, meets the test try as I might, tonight I’ll rest having put words, in this here mess. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
High there, love this one. Titia [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 06-18-2001).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
speaking about getting into messes with words..  Meet the king  |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Hello Titia....thank you for peeking in...was wandering through the books again... Balladeer! I find it hard to believe that you would EVER find yourself saying what you don't want to say...right? LOL...just remember...it is always in what you hear! Not read! Or is that vice-versa? Thank you both for reading! and half-believing! Or...believing, half-reading... uh-oh, I've confused myself.... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
If that's messy, then color me hogwash  |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Quite an enjoyable 'mess' you've put together here! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Enjoyed the read, Nicely penned, Decaflame. PM [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-19-2001).] |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I sometimes find I've too many words and tend to stumble, trip on them, fall flat on my face. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
From one word fumblebumbler to another, it's not so bad, and your poem is soooo good! ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(smiling) Ah... words..such lairs and liars the can be.... enjoyed the read |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like this very much....it bounces along....reads very nice |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
yet these words oftimes prance around as if an inane, wayward clown leading me down streets vast, so dark language then becomes surreal, stark my mind, I admit, never rests but I know if strained, meets the test try as I might, tonight I’ll rest having put words, in this here mess. Mess?? this not at all. A mess would be what my pen is spurting out now. My muse and I are not on talking terms. , but I see your muse and you are perfectly aligned, dancing in perfect poetic timing. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
If only I could have my words flow like this when in a mess. Very nicely written. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Thank you all for turning out to read "Words" and enjoying this mess of vocab.... it was fun! |
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