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Fancy
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 189
TN/USA

0 posted 2001-06-18 01:27 PM


What is this we feel
What is this we share
Is there a name for it
Is there something
with which to compare?

It's a song with no words
A poem with no rhyme
A lonely train
on a one way track
trying to go back in time.

Do you dare fill the song
with love
The poem
with a beautiful rhyme
Do you dare chance
a one way trip
into the very core
of the heart and soul
to find what it is feeling
when out of control?

For surely there
are the words
we seek,
surely
the answers we'll find
to be able to fill
our song with love
and our poem
with beautiful rhyme.

Then the train will no longer
be needed
No return trip
would we care to make

The key of fate
has opened the door
We only need enter
to find what's
in store.

Once there,
assured, we will see
Hopefully,
It's the only place
we'll ever want to be!!!

© Copyright 2001 Fancy - All Rights Reserved
Jade
New Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 9
Emerald City
1 posted 2001-06-18 01:30 PM


Very nice Fancy.  This is filled with much wisdom.  Do you dare, were the key words for me.  So many never reach that.
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