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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-06-17 08:15 PM

Tonight Is tonight,
The music has began,
Won't you hold me close
Into your arms,
Look around,
There Is no one here,
Do you remember the past?
We used come here
And
dance all night,
This Is the place
Where we used to dance
And this Is place,
where First saw your face,
Smiling at me,
How time go by fast,
candlight and red roses,
you dance with me,
Without any word
laughing eyes,
come and
let us dance,
again all night,
Hold me tight,
never let me go,
The music is still playing loudly
tonight,
let us make this night
to remember,
you dance with me,
when you dance with me....

and Won't forget this night forever....

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 06-17-2001).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-06-17 08:42 PM

VanDana~
What a lovely romantic poem.
You just keep waltzing across our hearts !
Love ya'
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-06-17 08:55 PM

this sounds like a lovely night, *s thank you for a soft and pleasant read
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-06-17 09:55 PM

Lovely memories, vandana. May your song always play on.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

4 posted 2001-06-18 06:04 PM

...never take the chance and miss the dance, just to miss the pain....

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-06-18 06:10 PM

Enjoyed your poem vandana...James

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2001-06-18 06:11 PM

Romance written so very well....very good!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-06-18 06:31 PM

ah, well done my friend. . .

shall we dance??

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-02-06 01:19 PM

Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you always save the last dance for your love and hold hands in waltz for eternity! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, swet friend, this is soooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

9 posted 2002-02-13 04:35 PM

romantic!

Enjoyed Vandana

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