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Zinsser
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0 posted 2001-06-17 05:06 PM



Lets Dream


Lets hold hands and dream
Of white sand beaches and white foam seas
Under blue skys matching your eyes
Moon beams illuminating our passion in the night

by
Connie McDonald
Copyright@2001
May 24, 2001

© Copyright 2001 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Mother_Earth
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1 posted 2001-06-17 06:16 PM


Zinsser, what a lovely dream.  Hope it works out that way.  ME
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-06-17 06:41 PM


Welcome to Passions!  This is the first of yours that I have read.  I hope that you feel as if you have indeed come into a family of friends....

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2001-06-17 10:19 PM


A vision of loveliness in your dreams.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-06-17 10:20 PM


Zinsser~
Very nicely written.
Soft and pretty.
Welcome to Passions !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Suetang
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5 posted 2001-06-17 10:28 PM


Zinsser
I thought your words painted such a beautiful picture..........Sue

Suetang

Zinsser
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6 posted 2001-06-18 09:27 AM


   Thanks to all of you   : )
  Its still very scarey for me to post anything   LOL  I'm a big chicken... or very private.... how ever you want to look at it.... : )
       thanks again
         Connie

JLR
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7 posted 2001-06-19 12:50 PM


Now this is a dream I wouldn't mind reoccuring...short, sweet, beautiful!
Poeminister
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8 posted 2001-06-19 12:53 PM


Beautiful, very nicely done.
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