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Garden of Ever
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Garden of Ever |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Garden of Ever Storms begin raging, my soul seeks the dark artificial the barriers, shams, burdened I. Binded by spells, contrived by your art cold eyes of truth, after-thoughts become lies. As time ends it's day, another one gone yet many to follow, destructive it seems. A digital bliss emerges come dark as if there's no morrow, I live in my dreams. In moonlight I waltz to the words of your voice, your resonance begging, magnetic in sway. These are the times, that seconds come first in the Garden of Ever, the night stays my day. Haunted by eyes, the deepest of blues blind leading blind, in music we stroll. This is the dance, in world set apart lost in the ever, the dark of my soul. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
In the Garden of Ever, the night stays my day...great line! Enjoyed. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
'as if there's no morrow, I live in my dreams' Ahh, don't we all live in those dreams, so many times..very provocative and well done...gentle smile |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful phrasing Wynter ... so many lines stand out beautifully in this delicate piece, very nicely written!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I love the title, Wynter. Very appropriate. All writing comes |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You know I understand this one. And I love the sound and flow of it. The phrase "Garden of Ever", is perfect. Sandra |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very deep and mysterious |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
JLR glad you liked that line *s Logan yes dream living is more satisfying at times than the real. Kit glad you enjoyed the lines *s Lone Wolf the title always comes after wards and hopefully makes sense  catalinamoon thank you so much Sandra for being such a good support on here with my writing huggsssss Irish Rose "very deep and mysterious " yes wasn't it? ~smiling a thank you Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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