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Silence of Duplicity
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Silence of Duplicity |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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There are scars on my arms left by an itch to finish start of long ago... for even in conception a death in me grew slow... and I became what I became I tell you all just what I am... I have loved too many, luv... some not too well others, fell to shadow of regret... and even yet today I drink too deep the cup of life.... and I hold your hand and walk awhile just for price a scent of spice blessing's grace... gift of life a smile upon your face. I kiss too well and hit too hard and sharpen claws on stone of walls that I feel cornered in. And should you dare I pray you will-- tell all--I beg you-- Please begin. Drink and take you serum's pill.. until you think you've had your fill... made partner in complicity by silence of duplicity... *repost from Open #9* |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh how well I know that trapped feeling....you have written it well darlin girl |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you for reposting this...it's truly an amazing poem...so full of YOU! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
what kind of pill was that again?..just kidding..always a treat to read you *s huggsssss ~M "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I tell you all just what I am... I have loved too many, luv... some not too well others, fell to shadow of regret... nice, very nice  Maree |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Haunting write, my friend. A very fitting title, I think. All writing comes |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
why is it that our poisons taste so good never allow yourself to be silenced you have a voice that deserves to be heard. Take care. "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done, and aptly named. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very well done.... tied in a nice package with an ending which says it all... I enjoyed |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very good writing! i enjoyed the flow of this.. what is it they say..? you especially have to hurt like hell..to write well... so sorry for the hurt..but what a poet.. hugs, g no i wont be afraid. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Paula--hey lady, must be that Gemini restlessness, eh? Hugs to you and thanks!!! PdV--full of ME...I hope that's a good thing! Thank you (me hopes heh heh) M? I DO write about pills alot, don't I? lol..serum pills, bitter pills...sigh, Thanks you so much. Hope you are feeling better! Much love and thanks to "my sista!" LW--thank you, sometimes saying nothing is comparable to agreeing, don't ya think? Thanks. Hope all is well with you! brian...I guess it's because we pick our poisons, eh? Hugs and be good this weekend!  Interloper, thanks so much for reading! g--thanks you for the wonderful compliment. Hugs to all! |
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