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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
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0 posted 2001-06-17 02:05 AM



Our Song


I’ll sing the melody
you join in harmony

a song of bittersweet
we both know complete

about dreams undone
living a life of shun

secrets held from the light
betrayed to live in fright

yet, now a true friend behold
a rare thing we hold

Maybe it was circumstance
or perhaps by some odd chance

that one day I brought along
to this place my silent song

a song now writing lyrics to
by not just one, but two, with you

in that we hear a common sound
welling from a common ground

to look for you I did not come
but friends indeed we have become

                          
                          
duet by 1slick_lady & Krawdad

"As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it."     Wendell Berry


© Copyright 2001 Krawdad - All Rights Reserved
Logan
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since 2001-05-28
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Arkansas
1 posted 2001-06-17 02:13 AM


Very nicely done, the two of you...gentle smile
JLR
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since 2001-02-04
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2 posted 2001-06-17 02:38 AM


Standing ovation...take your bows!
Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
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Regina SK; Canada
3 posted 2001-06-17 02:38 AM


Well written both you.  Enjoyed the read.


ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2001-06-17 07:12 AM


Very nicely done.......I commend both of you!
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2001-06-17 07:29 AM


Wonderful work to both of you!    

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Kit McCallum
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Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2001-06-17 07:53 AM


A lovely collaboration ... applause to you both for these tender sentiments!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace
7 posted 2001-06-17 02:15 PM


thank you all...it was fun...we will do it again...and ty k...helen
Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

8 posted 2001-06-18 01:20 AM


thanks again to all who stopped by
glad you liked...we'll try another soon
and ty h for the lead

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