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Noise.......My noise
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Noise.......My noise |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
{{{~~Noise~~}}} Noise… The rambling of thoughts Within the high closed walls of the mind The chaotic- drumming of the beats Within the rooms of the ever silently speaking heart. The quick-slow pulsing desires Within the alchemy of the body The raging tempest of feelings Within the ever never totally controlled self. The forever knocking kept words At the doors of the lips The confusing ever-refusing Imperfect utterances That seem forever engulfed In their worlds Like infants wanting to discover the world Through themselves As they all rage within me I know what is real noise And wish to hush it down Eternally…… or let it rage quitely..... ************************ {{{ Thank you }}} It's only me.......only me |
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SilentSongs Junior Member
since 2001-05-31
Posts 43Mist of Time |
Each in individual lives a melody too often unsung nonetheless music lives in each every sound we bring Enjoyed the read very much. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sometimes those thoughts can be deafening. Nice write!  All writing comes |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EnchantedMelody~ 'The forever knocking kept words At the doors of the lips' Don't you just love to share those words ? ! Thank you for doing so in such a lovely manner. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Romeo Junior Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 43 |
MyEnchanted_Melody splendid line about the inner noise which imprison self-liberation keep up the good work |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I agree with Marge thsoe are such well written words....I'm so glad you shared these personal feelings so the reader can relate to them! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Silentsongs~ I wouldn't have agreed more....... Thank you for taking the time to read or rather listen to this melody of mine....  ********************* ~Lone Wolf~ Deafening and roaring at times....... Thank you for reading it ********************* Dear ~*Marge*~ Yes......at times, I must admit I do........ Thank you for listening..... *********************** My friend ~Romeo~ First, welcome .... I'm glad you liked it and I would as long as you all would listen....... *********************** ~ethome~ and I'm really sooooooo glad that you read and liked them........ Thank you...... ******************************* It's only me.......only me |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and when you meet the noise that matches and hums in sync with your own. . . well written. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Sven~ and when ............what would happen then Thank you dear for reading this one *********************** It's only me.......only me I hope that would suffice eternally {{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}} [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 06-17-2001).] |
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