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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-06-16 07:49 PM


The wind is unforgiving
On an unprotected sea
The seagulls battle the wind
In slow motion they seem to be

How breathtaking is their gracefulness
Such a sight it is to behold
As I wrap my arms around me
In an effort to ward off the cold

In awe I gaze out to the water
As the waves come rolling in
How I love watching this display of nature
Over and over again

The seagulls spy a tasty morsel
That has washed up on the sand
Soon they come from out of nowhere
And en masse they come to land

Summer is a long time over
No one else is here but me
So I'll close my eyes and imagine
You are sharing this beauty with me

How easily I'll reminisce
Of the times I've spent with you
And know that in my dreams
You will always come into view

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
1 posted 2001-06-16 09:30 PM


Yet, another beautiful poem you have written. You're very talented.  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

SilentSongs
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since 2001-05-31
Posts 43
Mist of Time
2 posted 2001-06-16 10:25 PM


Filled with images invoking the senses.

Well doone.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
3 posted 2001-06-16 10:43 PM


This one brings back many memories of summers spent at the beach at my grandparents cottage.  So nice.  Thank you!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
4 posted 2001-06-17 12:50 PM


How very kind are your words and are very much appreciated.......Sue

Suetang

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