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Smile Me A Treasure
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Smile Me A Treasure |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Smile Me A Treasure I’ve found a treasure in your smile. A little pleasure for a while It shows the girl within your eyes That little curl your mouth applies. It brings those sounds that pleasure makes Brings little sighs that makes me quake And warms my heart within its light It even stays my dreams at night. It turns my thoughts to rainbow hue And chases shadows from my view It makes me look upon the sky And search for butterflies that fly. It stokes the heat of my desire Stirs the kettle with its fire And brings to view that boy I knew So long ago, so dim the view. So if you can please smile again They are the flowers of my glen. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I certainly hope she comes back to smile soon, if nothing more than to join us that are smiling here for having the opportunity to read this! Thank you Sy! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It turns my thoughts to rainbow hue And chases shadows from my view It makes me look upon the sky And search for butterflies that fly. It stokes the heat of my desire Stirs the kettle with its fire And brings to view that boy I knew So long ago, so dim the view. So if you can please smile again They are the flowers of my glen. ==================================== your poetry is the treasure... and grants the beholder a smile in full measure. and this one is a sigh from Sy... and a smile on high . (and its also a ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis) *winkiewinkie* Love ya make me smile Stinky  me[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 06-16-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love how you rhyme and the softness of your thoughts..always a wondeful read, Sy ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Is still shinning *L* JM, To my smiling butterfly, wikiewinkie Stinky Nakd, And I love the softness of your comments. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Not only is this poetically perfect in rhyme and meter Seymour, but the sentiments are simply delightful. A wonderful poem that will leave each reader smiling for the beauty you've captured here.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, You say the nicest things, again I thank you twice. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Tweak of smile your intent Know it brought much merriment Upon this face a smiling grace Within your rhyme this smile is mine !  Love n' hugs ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 *winkiewinkie* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, I thank you for the hugs and smile. *L* JM, Now thats what I call a butterfly. Love ya Sy |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sir Sy, I'm smiling right now at the beauty and exuberance of your tribute to her  Excellent flow, phrasing, rhyme and imagery~Take care, Melissa~ |
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