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Come with Me
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Come with Me Come play with me in words of love basic colored plastic balls inside an air filled bubble just one more poem the only colors red, blue and yellow Come lay with me on sheets of summer nothing but your skin on mine atop a soft filled feather bed just one more night the only senses touch, sound and scent Come walk with me through yesterday hand in hand enough through dreams so nearly true as ours just one more moment the only reality once, again and us |
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FireDancer123 Junior Member
since 2001-06-14
Posts 43Virginia |
This is beautiful. It likes me much. ::write forever:: "If you've never stared off into the distance, then your life is a shame." - A.Duritz |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
JLR- Lovely thoughts penned...enjoyed this very much. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
JLR...it is very beautifully written ...Well done |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
JLR- so romantic I love it! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
JLR, thank you for reminding me this is possible. You have left me with a smile.  All writing comes |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
JLR, this is so beautiful! Thanks for posting it.. *smiles* ~Tier |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
lovely! i especially liked the first line in each of the stanzas... this one is particularly wonderful: "Come walk with me through yesterday" nice job! |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Some poems are pretty...like this one. Michael Proust- |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
JLR, soooooo beaitiful!!!! I love your work so much! Sauni Sauni :) |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
JLR...soft & tender...nice job...helen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JLR~ 'Come play with me in words of love' Now, I REALLY like that thought. Enjoyed this read muchly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I've lived these lines and they are special and wonderful for me to read from another's hand. Thankyou! "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
a delicate and tender write of gentle moments |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
JLR...beautiful poem "Come lay with me on sheets of summer" great line...helen |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
JLR, don't know how I missed this earlier, but so happy to see it now. Very beautifully said with such a good imagery...gentle smile |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
JLR, I like this.. very much enjoyed  TaraB |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
JLR, this is beautifully expressed... so many beautiful inspired lines here... regards, sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
R.J. I loved this! Great Poem! Laura |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
love the images and the feel... nicely done indeed!! |
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