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JLR
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0 posted 2001-06-15 08:52 PM


Given the Choice


Given the choice
I would take us back to poets
for what we lost as friends
was greater to me
than anything we gained

given that you’re gone
without even a note left on the cyber frig

I guess what’s so confusing
is that I’ve given so many others
so many reasons to leave
yet with you I don’t have a clue
what I did or didn’t do

given the choice
I would take us back to poets


© Copyright 2001 JLR - All Rights Reserved
walker
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1 posted 2001-06-15 08:55 PM


JLR- it would be great if we could read minds, at least we would know right? Loved this one!

Mother_Earth
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2 posted 2001-06-15 08:56 PM


JLR, this is so sad, but are you sure it is your fault?  Take care, friend.  ME
1slick_lady
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3 posted 2001-06-15 09:18 PM


JLR...not knowing can be the worst hurt of all...helen

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-06-15 09:41 PM


JLR~
Emotionally rendered.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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