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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida

0 posted 2001-06-15 08:38 PM



I put all my heart in this love.
Invested my all.
Gave you my soul.
Invited you to love.
My hand I gave you when you needed direction.
My kisses I gave you when you needed love.
I did nothing wrong,
but love you.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 06-15-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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1 posted 2001-06-15 08:44 PM


So it is Walker, so don't blame yourself.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-06-15 09:04 PM


'Well, I've been one poor correspondent and I've been too, too hard to find'...check your email, please.
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA
3 posted 2001-06-15 09:22 PM


Often times it is not what we did or didn't do that causes things to go bad.  The other person's attitude carries a lot of weight as to how it will all go.  Good write.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-06-18 06:20 PM


And so we try again realizing that most will only be friends and the special ones are rare and valuable...James
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2001-06-18 06:24 PM


Walker I really like the way you can use just a few lines to get such good points across....I know that many see it the same way....just loving someone !
Sven
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6 posted 2001-06-18 06:30 PM


sometimes, the blame lies on both sides. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

vandana
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7 posted 2001-06-18 06:46 PM


enjoy your read
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