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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-06-15 04:17 PM





~*~

words  have  soared  away
muse, once amused, now confused
searching   heart's   quiet

~*~


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 06-15-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-15 04:21 PM


Ah searching the quiet places in our hearts is always a way to unconfuse...

enjoyed the words as usual..


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2 posted 2001-06-15 04:29 PM


Very beautiful words!Enjoyed it!
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3 posted 2001-06-15 04:35 PM


god!!!! i know all about that!! muse split on me too for oh so long... that's why all my reposts... LOL... couldn't write much for what seemed eons!! drowned myself in music.............. *sigh*

this is wonderful, karilea!! so few words which say so very much.... i'm proud of you, Ms. Poet!!  

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4 posted 2001-06-15 05:30 PM


Aggravating, isn't it? I don't remember the last time I wrote anything....I keep waiting, though.
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5 posted 2001-06-15 06:16 PM


The words will return, Karilea.  They're only resting.  Nicely done.

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6 posted 2001-06-15 06:21 PM


Ahh, Sunshine, with the name so apt, as you bring so much sunshine to all of us. Your muse just is resting a moment, from being out of breath..You do so well...gentle smile
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7 posted 2001-06-15 06:33 PM


Sunshine,
        
The quiet muse knows
the heart abhors a vacuum
passions must return
              

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8 posted 2001-06-15 06:40 PM


Wonderful Karilea ... writer's block never sounded so beautiful ... me thinks your muse is not confused at all.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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9 posted 2001-06-15 08:44 PM





Wonderful ........and deep....

A pen sometimes sleeps
but has to wake again
and let out the power
it keeps..........

Thank you  
*********************************


It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

[This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 06-15-2001).]

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10 posted 2001-06-15 09:29 PM


Karilea~
Got something for ya' !  
~*Marge*~

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11 posted 2001-06-15 09:50 PM


O can relate much to this mood, but I think its just the muse in a powernap, restoring poetic energies...then the words'll flow again, nicely written...

Poeminister

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12 posted 2001-06-15 10:15 PM


This is a very well done piece. All minimalists apllaud you. Obvioulsy your muse has not gone, apparently the inspiration is in encapsulated form.
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13 posted 2001-06-16 12:34 PM


It is true.....sunshine
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14 posted 2001-06-16 01:58 AM


this says much...

very good job packing the umph into this little one..  

hugs, g

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and it might be a sin
but i'll take your bet
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15 posted 2001-06-18 09:36 AM


Thank you all so VERY much for enjoying this with me.  She [my muse] snuck back in over the weekend!

And she had a VERY good time!

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