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Crumbling |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Crumbling I wrestle with my heart the empty part full side tries to spill warming up the chill streaming through the halls finding cracks within walls bricked scars still bleed weaken under need a push to break them down to walls built so sound surfaces soft and rough scrape stone can reshape "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
your usual excellent work..... enjoyed this a great deal.. Frozen now supended incased in the icy words of silence which in glacial form do build with each passing season of doubt Ice aged remorsefulness of wasted summer days shared in naked hedonistic displays of love, compresses the layers of frigid denial into snowpacked fields... we can only ski atop and not melt without a new springtime to thaw these inclimate hearts... |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
I absolutely loved the layout of the poem and way it read... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I felt shaky reading this !!!  "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Your work always leaves me thinking...and that's a GOOD thing.  Thank you.Michael Proust- |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
I found a door… You better come through there’s a party on this side waiting for you!  |
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