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sodpossom
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0 posted 2001-06-15 11:29 AM

Two hearts racing with a lustful beat
Alone and in love in his back seat
Too young and foolish to realize the danger
After the moment he would be but a stranger

She would be left to remember
That heated night of early December
For he left her a part of his-self
More than just his picture on a shelf

A seed was sown that December night
Nine months after he was gone out of sight
A little boy in the image of his dad
and the eternal memory of the moment they had

Now 18 Decembers later
This little boy meets a young female waiter
Two hearts racing with a lustful beat
Alone and in love in his back seat

She would be left to remember
That heated night of early December
For he left her a part of his-self
More than just his picture on a shelf

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-06-15 11:40 AM

Hello 'possum! Strong read! Good message! Welcome to Passions! Please, check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

sodpossom
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2 posted 2001-06-15 11:49 AM

Thanks Sunshine!Greatly appreciated!

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

3 posted 2001-06-15 12:27 PM

Welcome!

this is sad....but so strong a message

Looking forward to more

~SEA

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

4 posted 2001-06-15 12:33 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
A lesson learned by many in this poem.
Good writing.

BloomingRose

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2001-06-15 12:47 PM

Enjoyed your writing..Welcome to Passions

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

sodpossom
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6 posted 2001-06-15 12:49 PM

Thank you all for reading and the nice welcome!

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

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7 posted 2001-06-15 01:08 PM

Well now that is a story and a half... enjoyed the read!!

sodpossom
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8 posted 2001-06-15 01:10 PM

Thanks Cpat!Glad you enjoyed it!

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

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missouri

9 posted 2001-06-15 01:31 PM

Nicely done....a not so soft reminder of where passion can lead you

sodpossom
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10 posted 2001-06-15 01:35 PM

Thanks Paula!It has got a many of person in trouble!

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2001-06-15 03:18 PM

Sodpossom,
That mirror you held up has been around a long time. Excellent write.

sodpossom
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12 posted 2001-06-15 04:25 PM

Thanks Seymour!You got that right,and it probably want go any where either!

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