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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-06-15 08:05 AM



WAITING…

I have set in the shade many times,
and watched the hands of another work,
doing things my own hands,
only stuttered at when attempting.
The heat isn't as bad in the shade...
and with the proper squint of my eyes
the trash so carefully tossed aside from
previous mechanical surgeries,
isn't too bad either.


Iambe's hands perform miracles...
she can touch and turn with a deft knowledge
that anything that moves can be broken, patched,
fixed, removed...
I thought once about asking her...
but I sit in the shade and watch instead,
the sway of unfettered breast
beneath the loose coveralls keep time
with the twist of her shoulders as she loosens
yet another bolt.

MORNING…

When I wake up
and find grease marks staining the carpet
from coveralls thrown carelessly aside
as she stepped out of them,
I know I can see in daylight the things
night's shallow depths had hidden.

Books strewn about in random disorder
show a taste for the sensational
and what passes for romance in this...
Jerry Springer reality we live in.

Clothes have fallen like palm fronds
in the face of a hurricane wind
clogging the open space,
fighting for the right to lie undisturbed
until wash day...or week..

Stepping outside to the garage,
I light a smoke as I stare at tools
lined in careful order on benches...
a clean floor swept till it contains
no remnant of the dust that falls
from rusting fenders or tires caked
with red Oklahoma clay...

One honors I guess...
what one honors...
and tool steel
is a lot more forgiving
than a heart.


ABSOLUTION…

Simple really...
I don't quite understand why others don't.
(Understand that is)
It is all just a matter of taking out the
things which hold any part in...
taking the part out...
figuring out why it broke..or quit...
and putting the thing back together...


Everyone should know...
It takes four things for a car to run
Fuel
Air
Compression
and a spark.

You figure out which is missing
and then track down the problem
and correct it... how hard is that?

God... I have heard her say that
so many times and yet...
as I watch her sleep..
the only spark I can think of
is the one she generates..
fueled at times on alcohol,
she can compress living into one night
and leave me gasping for air...

maybe she's right...
It is simple.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-06-15 08:43 AM


Some beautiful imagery....the jump from the ordinary to the extraordinary is done with such ease....and surprise....
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2 posted 2001-06-15 10:10 AM


I hadn't realized how much I missed Iambe.  It's so good to read of her again, through your eyes.
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3 posted 2002-09-26 01:49 PM


This poem is compression, air and spark. And fuel for the reader's mind.
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