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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2001-06-14 10:16 PM


The Searching Soul
~*~

Golden sun melds with glassy raindrops
resting in divided parts of mountain tops
reflections of echoes drift in water
many cries are heard in ears that hear
seen through spiritual eyes
as swift winds call for rapid flight
towards the soon descending light
visions not of earthly things
rest upon a searching soul

~*~
BloomingRose

[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (edited 06-14-2001).]

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Poeminister
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1 posted 2001-06-14 10:28 PM


BloomingRose-
Lovely imagery painted with your words.  Very nicely done.

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2 posted 2001-06-14 10:33 PM


BloomingRose~
Hey there gal !
So good to see you !
This one touches my heritage spirit,
as you might well know that it would.
Beautiful !

Where ya' been ?
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2001-06-15 07:54 AM


very nice images.. a well painted picture indeed.
BloomingRose
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4 posted 2001-06-15 01:10 PM


Poe~ Thank you so much!

Marge~ As always, I thank you. I thought I would try my hand (or pen) on the subject
that comes to the minds of many these days.
As far as where I've been... guess you could say I have been vegetating.  

Cpat~ I thank you kindly  

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5 posted 2001-06-16 05:03 PM


and does the searching soul find??

excellent questions. . . great form. . .  

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BloomingRose
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6 posted 2001-06-16 05:15 PM


Sven~ Thank you. I think the seeker will always find, if the search is done with the heart as well as the mind.  

Deb

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