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Open Poetry #14

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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-06-14 02:00 PM

Weave for me
A lair…
Trapdoors abound
Amongst the hidden
Passages of your
Silken sticky words

Walking threads
Of thought, with no
Pretense I will survive,
I search endlessly
For the way

Strung between
Today and yesterday
It will wait for
Me to forget myself
And tangle

Such skill…
Weave for me
A lair…
That I too may trap
The unaware.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-06-14 02:01 PM

Well woven verse

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

2 posted 2001-06-14 02:04 PM

I think in all
of this entwine
you have woven
one, just fine...

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-06-14 02:09 PM

Wow...I really like this! Seems an intriging theme of yours lately, much enjoyed.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2001-06-14 02:17 PM

i shall
chew
through your
glue
for I
can see
straight
through
you

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-06-14 02:26 PM

Thanks everyone for the comments..

Interloper...not nearly as well woven as I have seen from your pen

Deca..nice words and they rhyme..thanks

JLR... Words are such a great thing to write about...so many ways to use them

1slick_lady (chuckling) I have always been
easy to see through...comes from having no substance .... BUT...I haven't eaten glue in a long time...

Thanks again to all!!!

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