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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
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0 posted 2001-06-14 01:39 PM




he thinks only that she is
special, she resides and reclines
in his thoughts, spoiled
and petted,
smiling,
purring contentedly

~ what he would do for her ~

she thinks only that he is
unique, he lingers in her heart,
complacently recalling all
of him
content with his wanderings
in her mind

~ what she would do for him ~

~*~

imagination
in their hearts combined as one
fantasies unfold

~*~



© Copyright 2001 Decaflame - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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ireland
1 posted 2001-06-14 01:48 PM



she thinks only that he is
unique, he lingers in her heart,
complacently recalling all
of him
content with his wanderings
in her mind

Beautiful words, Decaflame.

"Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2001-06-14 01:50 PM


he thinks only that she is
special, she resides and reclines
in his thoughts, spoiled
and petted,
smiling,
purring contentedly....


Interesting perpsectives from both sides...

enjoyed the read..

JLR
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since 2001-02-04
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3 posted 2001-06-14 03:43 PM


Very cool write through of a fantasy becoming reality.  Hope it always keeps the dream!
wayoutwalt
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4 posted 2001-06-14 03:47 PM


big smiles~~~ thanks o yuh
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By the sea
5 posted 2001-06-14 04:04 PM


The fantasy can often be much more special than the reality.  Good one!

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

catalinamoon
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6 posted 2001-06-14 10:32 PM


Mmm, I like this a lot.
Sandra

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7 posted 2001-06-15 12:45 PM


Do I like this one - oh yes!

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~

Janet Marie
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8 posted 2001-06-16 08:13 AM


she thinks only that he is
unique, he lingers in her heart,
complacently recalling all
of him
content with his wanderings
in her mind

~ what she would do for him ~
======================================

ahhhh yes.......contententment.........
what we wouldnt do for it.......

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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9 posted 2001-06-16 09:25 AM


Wow!  This was fabulous!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast
10 posted 2001-06-16 10:07 AM


Decafalme, You are sooooo talented! Your words just pour smoothly, softly, sweetly, onto the mind and heart! Wonderful!

~Tier

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