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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-06-14 10:22 AM


You….

Take the moment
Sealing it safe

Within the release
Of your heart

Oh, warm….

How many words
Then
For content

When it is more than
Happy

Or pleased

Far, far more than
Satisfied

Content comes
In your smile

Your eyes

Touch

An underlying
But quiet
Exhilaration

Still waters
Trembling in the depths

Rippling currents

Oh, warm

Perhaps then,
The most proper
Other word
For content

Is

You


write with grace, all others lose face;
"Jo was very tall, thin, ... and reminded one of a colt..." LMA

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-06-14 10:50 AM


Perhaps the best words for this are... GENTLY GREAT!!
IWithinYou
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2 posted 2001-06-14 11:01 AM


Oh perfect.......perfect, perfect, perfect!  I loved this write.

"Who says dreams are dreams?  Not I......not I I say again"

[This message has been edited by IWithinYou (edited 06-14-2001).]

Poeminister
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3 posted 2001-06-14 11:24 AM


"Still waters
Trembling in the depths"

Beautiful and gentle in its touch... Well done.

Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 2001-06-14 12:03 PM


This is a remarkable flow of words, Lady in White...

Regards to you,
Sudhir

OLIAS
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5 posted 2001-06-14 12:08 PM


Wow, I liked this alot, great write and Thank you.

Regards,
Olias.

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6 posted 2001-06-14 01:03 PM


what is contentment
what are all your thoughts and dreams
imagination

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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