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PoeticaL
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since 2001-03-31
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0 posted 2001-06-15 02:16 AM


when the world
blinks its lazy eye
and shuts me out
and the dark
entraps me beneath
it's shoe
and my stomach jumps
outside of myself
there is but...
there is a hush
but...yet what?

when the clouds
cry into the sun
and the sizzles
are nothing
just steam flowing
going nowhere
into lost
there is what?
but
is there a hush
of somewhat?

all the words
I could be
just to "be"

could I choose?

I'd be a blank
journal in your
weeping hands
I'd be your
hushed thought
for a shush
of your whisper
is sweetly tough

a flicker of
you in fleeting
is a rush
my complicated
perfected hush

6/15/2001

......for Joe


"I'm a junkyard full of false starts....Elliot Smith"

© Copyright 2001 Kristy - All Rights Reserved
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since 2001-06-05
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1 posted 2001-06-15 07:57 AM


nice flow and sounds...

enjoyed the read.

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