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Not Lonely
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I'm not lonely, you know though times I miss you so. I'm not in need of you You see, I'm now brand new. A woman who can live with nothing left to give. True, no one wants my love so what, I'm strong and tough. Though nightly when I cry Your memory is why. There's no denial here You'll never see my tears. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 06-13-2001).] |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
True? ahh, for some reason, I would have to doubt that very much. The world is not completely made up of fools...gentle smile, enjoyed as all your posts. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a sad one Sandra..HUGS..i can relate...  ~Victoria~
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sad... well written but sad... and as for having nothing left to give..it is amazing how we find things.. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, A difficult and poignant poem about letting go. But you are not a woman with "nothing left to give". You have so much to give, and only the worthy man will see this. Your road is just beginning, and one day all the love you possess will be returned to you in full. Beautiful write... Love, Elise |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Related much to the lost love of this...and to the denial of denial. Well done! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
:-( Well done. Write on. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
True, no one wants my love so what, I'm strong and tough. not true, Sandra. There is someone special out there. I know that when love goes wrong it can hurt so much but part of the healing process is to trust in love again. THanks for sharing. "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I am always amazed at the caring I receive within these blue pages. Thanks so much everyone, for understanding, and caring enough to write. I am determined to get through my sadness, but it sure helps, when someone writes an encouraging word. Sandra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It's times like these that I have to remember that life is not necessarily good or bad or happy or sad but it is a collection of experiences and relationships...and even though these experiences don't unfold exactly as we like we can still learn and profit...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm not going to give you a cliche, it hurts doesn't it and it's allowed....  "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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