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ethome
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0 posted 2001-06-13 05:26 PM


                 From the cortex chambers ventriliquists speak
                      to the conscious voices of thought in
                             the soul's quiet palace.
                        They confirm necessities: Amen -
                       and forgiveness, they repair despair,
                   teaching lessons from straw to sticks to bricks.

                      Yet what sad reality, the acceptance of
                           the mediating value of lies,
                         when the truth was never better.
                    Who are they that disguise? body and mind,
                        until they are forced into the open
                         exposed to glib pretentious rote.

                         Yet, all the voices in the palace,
                         ventriloquists of inner thought,
                           remain quantum reminders,
                that from the heart, to the great light that fills the sky,
                 all accept the gift of consciousness - and in the end,
                      it comes down to the truth of the matter.

                                 © Eric True




The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

[This message has been edited by ethome (edited 06-13-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-06-13 05:28 PM


Truer words were never penned  
Well done my friend.

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-06-13 05:32 PM


Whoa....this is going to take me a few reads to fully comprehend the impact of what you are getting across...

gads, I enjoy poetry that makes me THINK!

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-06-13 05:49 PM


Ethome,
THe truth of the matter is relevent to the paths taken to find it. So in the end becomes irrelevent. If that makes any sense to you.

ethome
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4 posted 2001-06-13 06:10 PM


Thank you Interloper I appreciate the words!

Thanks Sunshine! It's a real compliment when I can get you to think!

Seymour the sun is the sun the moon is the moon the day is light and the night is dark.......if someone pulls a gun on you and threatens you....you know what the consequences can be...that's the truth of the matter. There are things brought about by their relevence for sure but there things born of truth and they don't change.   If you look through a window and witness a murder then, that's the truth of the matter, and I agree the paths taken to get there produce the truth of the matter...so I think we agree on that part but in the final analysis it never becomes irrelevent it's always .."The Truth of the Matter' ........light, dark, rain, shine, drowning, cancer, heart failure, loss of a loved one, the look in a true love's eyes, the lies that made the truth of the matter punish everyone they affected, the petition for love based on greed and this consciousness we enjoy by being able to converse with one another...unexplained by all scientists...without this consciousness I am no more...and that's the truth of the matter!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

Martie
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5 posted 2001-06-13 06:12 PM


ethome--My cortex chambers are on overdrive with this poem...very interesting and thoughtfilled write.
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6 posted 2001-06-14 02:58 AM


I re read & reread.
I guess a favoured truth is joy when heard from others.

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7 posted 2001-06-14 05:06 AM


First of all, how true - I loved how you used this line: they repair despair,teaching lessons from straw to sticks to bricks, and secondly, I into cranial overdrive, I'll get back to you on this one, and that is the fact of the matter!  

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~

Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2001-06-14 06:26 AM


Excellent Ethome ... so much to ponder within these lines. You were my first read this morning and you've got me awake and thinking long before the caffiene kicks in. Thank you for the early start, I really enjoyed this.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Watersign6
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9 posted 2001-06-14 09:14 AM


i will have to read it many more times but the truth of the matter is that i love it  
Paula Finn
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10 posted 2001-06-14 02:12 PM


YOU are the truth...and the truth is you...truths are NOT hammered in stone...but blended over time from all we experience, all we are, all we hope to be....and it can change in the blink of an eye...
Kethry
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11 posted 2001-06-15 12:26 PM


Ethome,
the truth of the matter is that this poem is deep...still water deep and I suspect all is not as it seems on the surface.
Keth

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



Janet Marie
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12 posted 2001-06-16 09:00 AM



                         Yet, all the voices in the palace,
                         ventriloquists of inner thought,
                           remain quantum reminders,
                that from the heart, to the great light that fills the sky,
                 all accept the gift of consciousness - and in the end,
                      it comes down to the truth of the matter.
=================================

wise words...from a wise poet...
and I like seeing this philosophical side of your poetry as well....
this is very cool ponderance here E-babes...
well done me groovy music man  
jm

Lone Wolf
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13 posted 2001-06-16 09:12 AM


Wow!!  Excellent write, Eric.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

VAS
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14 posted 2001-06-16 05:03 PM


a truly powerful piece

in the end, the truth will remain

all else will be a dusty refrain


I truly love the 'ventriloquist' analogy to this

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