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vandana
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0 posted 2001-06-13 05:16 PM



Morning with the dew
In the rose,
Grey skies fills
with the clouds,
Washed away the showers
by the rain,

© Copyright 2001 vandana - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2001-06-13 05:19 PM


It all sounds so very fresh!   Nice idea and writing!
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2 posted 2001-06-13 07:07 PM


now this is something very different for you my friend. . . I like it. . .

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Watersign6
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3 posted 2001-06-14 09:01 AM


i enjoyed these lines very much  
Charisma
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4 posted 2001-06-14 09:07 AM


refreshing touch of morning

love it.

Charisma

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5 posted 2001-06-14 09:19 AM


Short, sweet, and very pretty. I liked it much.  

Jenn

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6 posted 2002-02-05 09:49 PM




(sigh) Soooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me sigh! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, sunshine fills your words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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