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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-06-13 04:40 PM


Emotions


Moisture
dripping, salty
to the taste, heated, fueled
by wandering thoughts, tomorrow's
current.

Questions
gathering drops,
anxiety easing
the doubts of concern, relieving
the fear.

Answers
seen face to face
responding, depth in eyes
speaking silently, as only
truth can.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2001-06-13 04:43 PM


                "Answers
                 seen face to face
                 responding, depth in eyes
                 speaking silently, as only
                 truth can."

That's a powerful verse.....good poem Wynter!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-06-13 04:46 PM


why thank you Me. E..of course you like truth..*s

~Smiles
M/Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Poeminister
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3 posted 2001-06-13 04:49 PM


Nakd--I like these all.  Wonderful Cinquains.
nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2001-06-13 04:55 PM


don't you just love  form, when all else fails..I turn to it..*s thank you

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2001-06-13 04:56 PM


Questions
gathering drops,
anxiety easing
the doubts of concern, relieving
the fear.


Interesting lines here...


enjoyed them all.....

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2001-06-13 05:02 PM


Hey C...I was  just on my third floor sweating to death..those moisture drops soaked me but good..came  down to cool off a bit and think about the tomorrows...see..anything can spark me to write..and most times it has nothing to do with the cause.
~Smiling..whoops forgot to thank you *s
M


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 06-13-2001).]

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