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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-06-13 02:00 PM



Each day
a new chance
to make life be
what we want
it to be,
to make a new
begining
for you and
for me.

Each day
we sit and talk
just a little
bit more,
and we discuss
our future
and what it holds
in store.

Each day
I see the softness
again return,
and I know deep
in our hearts
there is still
a fire that burns.

Each day
I realize
that it still
is true,
you still own my heart....
and I'm still in love
~with you.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

© Copyright 2001 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-06-13 02:09 PM


very sweet... and it is also reflective of how we must work atrelationships if we are to make then last... old ones and new..


enjoyed!

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2001-06-13 02:31 PM


Cpat, your words are true.  It is something we work at every day, but any love worth having is worth working together to keep.  Thanks for stopping in.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Sven
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3 posted 2001-06-13 07:22 PM


and each day is more wonderful than the last. . .

great job D. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Logan
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since 2001-05-28
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4 posted 2001-06-13 07:27 PM


Ahh, how tender and sweet, for it befits your name, which naturally caught my eye first thing..gentle smile
snowpants
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5 posted 2001-06-13 09:18 PM


I will echo everyone else by saying this is so beautifully sweet, GS!  I truly enjoyed this read...

sp  

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

Watersign6
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6 posted 2001-06-13 09:21 PM


well done it is a joy to read  
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Member Rara Avis
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7 posted 2001-06-13 09:32 PM


Donna,

Each day a new beginning....you do this beautifully...I know exactly how you feel...love and hugs to you...


Lauren~


***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


Victoria
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8 posted 2001-06-14 11:12 AM


lovely Donna..enjoyed your words

                 ~Victoria~


Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso


Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2001-06-14 09:48 PM


Thank you all so much for your support, I appreciate you more than words can express.  Being able to come here to Passions is such a wonderful thing, and you all make it wonderful to be here.  Much love and hugs to all.  
Donna

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Sunshine
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10 posted 2001-06-16 10:28 AM


Each day, and one day at a time....a lovely read....
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