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Krawdad
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0 posted 2001-06-13 01:50 PM


Opticosensate
electrospectacular
cumulonimbus!
                        
                    
                      
Ok, ok, so I had to invent a couple, but that's what a Poetic License is for, right?
I drove for about 40 miles under an incredible and huge electical storm last night and I had to do something with that.  It was quite indescribable, so I thought I might as well be creative and invent something.  The dendritic lightning flashing along the bottom of the cloud mass extended over 100 or more square miles in a single burst.  Amazing!!!  If you love storms, you would have loved this one!
                
                



"As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it."     Wendell Berry

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1slick_lady
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1 posted 2001-06-13 02:09 PM


k...we as poets have the right to invent do we not?...it is wonderful...giggle...h
Poeminister
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2 posted 2001-06-13 02:48 PM


Bravo!  
ethome
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3 posted 2001-06-13 05:05 PM


I know what they mean I just can't pronounce them!

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-06-13 05:13 PM


BRAVO!
An admirable feat!

VAS
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5 posted 2001-06-13 05:16 PM


ultramagnafique
trilingualification
clarification


oooh, now that is shameful

Krawdad, fantastic, I could see it all, even before the explanation

Titia Geertman
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6 posted 2001-06-13 06:52 PM


At least it was a very creative storm.

Super, LOL, like it.

Titia

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7 posted 2001-06-13 06:54 PM


this warrants some kind of challenge. . .

hmmmmmmmmm. . . well done. . .

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Secret Whisper
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8 posted 2001-06-13 06:56 PM


Interesting at the very least!

"We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912)

dgvarner
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9 posted 2001-06-18 01:28 PM


...huh??!!  i'd better go find my dictionary..will these words be in there??  

well it was fun anyway..lol

hugs, g

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no i...wont be afraid,
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Jade
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10 posted 2001-06-18 01:31 PM


Could someone pass a dictionary?      Bravo!
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