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Mark
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0 posted 2001-06-13 12:45 PM


The softness of
a woman's curves
in graceful reach
captures my appriciation
as coffee sipped
slides down richly
complimented by her laughter
delicate and free
she's unaware of me
at my desk here
amazed at the way her beauty
touches me

© Copyright 2001 Mark Hazen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-13 12:48 PM


Ah, coffee mates.....I enjoyed this!
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2 posted 2001-06-13 12:55 PM


yes...quiet admiration from afar...
well done poet sir...
great imagery here...simple and to the point.

she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me
like I'm a little untrusting when I think that the truth is gonna hurt ya
~MB20~

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3 posted 2001-06-13 01:29 PM


Nicely done... admiring and enjoying with still a hint of regret...


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4 posted 2001-06-13 10:15 PM


Liking this as well. Very easy to see the scenario.
Sandra

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5 posted 2001-06-13 11:52 PM


Mark--In just a few words you tell us the inner and outer scene..and you do it well.
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