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Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08
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0 posted 2001-06-13 09:28 AM




My Dearest

In my silent world, shimmering
memories, coat me this nightfall.
I see mineself, a reflection of thy words,
knowledge replacing fear of losing thy love.

In chamber, pillowed between thoughts,
visions of thine eyes, staring into mine,
piercing this heart, slowing it's beat
until forced to take in the night air,
cause a gasping from thy last of touch.

Would'st thou be coming soon?
The gifts of one long to reach out,
to be held by arms of one so missed.
Lips have remained softened, in wait
remembering the taste of thy kisses.

Sighing, I grow weary, in wonderment.
This note, shall I send on wings of dove,
hoping to reach thee, before morn.

In dreams, I shall hold onto thee,
thy warmth of gaze to drift me into sleep.
I scent with fragrance of Vanilla, hoping
memories too, shall grace thy pillowed thoughts
and keep me close 'til next we meet.

Lovingly Yours,
Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

© Copyright 2001 Lady Ollyne - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-06-13 09:47 AM


Shakespeare would like to hear from you....thank you for this!
Sven
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2 posted 2001-06-13 07:44 PM


I have indeed missed thy words Poet Fair, and is it any wonder when it is words such as these???

superb. . .

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snowpants
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3 posted 2001-06-13 09:49 PM


This is one of the best romantic poems I've read in a while...I truly enjoyed this one...excellent work!

sp  

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

Watersign6
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4 posted 2001-06-13 09:57 PM


so romantic and i enjoy it immensely  
Mark
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5 posted 2001-06-13 09:57 PM


What graceful writing.  Beautifully embraced womanhood.  
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The Shores of Alone
6 posted 2001-06-13 10:07 PM


Sweet, loving, and beautifully done.
Sandra

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