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Petaling
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Petaling |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Petaling After-gloom of night's default pieces treasured in mind's vault cling to me, erotic dust of past emotions, held in trust. Yesterday will not forget the morrow's coming quickly, yet alone for now, a rose in bloom waiting, listing, as future's loom Is weaving yarns, in text on blue, a background blend to spirit new, protecting me, from threaded bare, to lead me not into despair. Drawn am I, into a fire, in-between immersed desire, touching me, in frenzied heat. A mind-led journey, incomplete. Time is running out, compels internal shifting, inking well. Feelings spilling out this day, meaningless of word display. For only I, will resonate, replete of passions held by fate. Sighing, awaiting time, it's shift for seconds holding hours drift. Warned am I, approaching storm the words of many, chill the warm. These days will end, come ten or so. Finality will reach it's blow. But memories will hold their own no use to be's, no borrowed loans of words to calm, no need of bait in frenzied heat, I meditate. Invisable, this hold on me, Each never thought, a mystery. Each gap between the lines of you cling to me, to see me through. And you shall have, before that day an invitation come your way and petal you on path to be my comfort zone, to share with me. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 06-13-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very sensual...and well woven... this I enjoyed and had to read over just to savor.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hmmm well. I sometimes wonder if what I post is really understood..*s...'cause sometimes.........I am not even sure of what it is I am trying to say...*just kidding* I usually stick a hidden message or two or even three inside... thank you, poetic C ~Wynter pssttttt what does your name mean "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
bautifully work....loved reading this gentle loving gem. Charisma |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Unfair of me perhaps to read and only make brief comments... for what I take from poems at times is hard to put into comments... this one... suffice it to say spoke to me in several ways... I found the use of language sensual....the flow to be one that carried me like one of my own thoughts from here...to there...and at the same time...a bit of mystery in it all... My name means nothing....( grinning) except that I am a bad typist and too lazy to re-register.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
not unfair...your name makes me think of a cat..wanting to be patted...silly of me and maybe all you have to do is edit and change your name in profile..ask Sunshine or a moderator..maybe not..but I was wondering the choice of names...as sometimes others wonder about mine, which means my thoughts are naked for all to see...and are spontaneous ( not anything else)...as far as my meanings go..yes..I was trying for a tiny bit sensuous, but mostly trying to keep what I have in my life, despite warnings, innuendos, and life's interferences. I do enjoy you being here..you have brightened up the open with your poetry, talent and kind responses. Thank you. ~Softsmiles Maureen ( darn such spelling errors so unlike me *s "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 06-13-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Holding on to what we have...but all around us and we ourselves are changing daily..hourly...so nothing we have is the same from one moment to the next. I understand the urge and desire to keep the good things in our lives, but if held too tightly they fail to grow with us and with the world around us..become stale or fixed and our own experiences lessened... I am not saying do not hold on, but I am saying that we should always know the moment is where we are...and forever exists in relative terms... I am rambling... |
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