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one slow blanket
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one slow blanket |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Turn the bed down low as if I were a one-night guest.. Pull the blanket slow revealing sheets and your best guess Undrape the pillows for our heads whisper reassuring dread finding pinpoint in my eyes darkness without compromise Turn the bed down pull it slow-- lonely me. nowhere to go... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
you been gettin my undivided attention o yuh |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Short and sweet dearie...it's lovely...lonely... hugs  K |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Well...where you are doesn't sound that bad. Really liked this! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hon, if I was in your town, I'd help you paint it RED.  Sad but lovely. Maree |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
awwwwwww...perk up, you..and Happy Birthday  , dear one...((hugs))  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very nice use of images and flow to set the mood and convey the feeling... enjoyed this a great deal! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
melancholy. . . yes. . . that's the word I'd use here. . . excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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