Cherry Cola Ville (Thank you Coka Calo and Jimmy Buffet!)

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Open Poetry #14

Cherry Cola Ville (Thank you Coka Calo and Jimmy Buffet!)

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-06-12 11:36 PM

I flounder
In your mysteries
I wither
In possibilities

I’m wasting away again
In cherry colaville
Searchin for my lost shaker of Walt

I like pina coladas
I like toast and jam
But neither of these admissions
Let you know just who I am

I, my love
Am like a taxidermist
I just gotta get under your skin

You my love
Are like a pachyderm pissed
You can stomp till I’m very thin

SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT THERE’S A WOOOOOMAN TO BLAME
AND I KNOW
They sure is right!

SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT THERE’S A MAN THEY CAN BLAME
AND I KNOW
That’s the husband’s plight

See you again next time
In cherry cola ville
I’m sure I’ll be stooped over and bent

You see I tried to argue with my wife
When “Yes Maam! Yes Maam!”
Is what I meant

I love my wife
AND I ALWAYS WILL
Sometimes I think too much
About cherry cola ville

Searchin for my lost shaker of Walt
Some people say that I haven’t a name
And I know…it’s my own damn fault

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2001-06-12 11:48 PM

I think your shaker of Walt has been left out in the rain! (oh, that's ANOTHER song!).. cute Walt.

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-06-13 12:11 PM

Well, I love Jimmy Buffett...and this lived up to my expectaions. Bravo! Well done! I'll pass the walt if I find it.

sans38
Member

since 2001-03-03

Posts 117
Westland, Michigan

3 posted 2001-06-13 10:49 AM

This put a big smile on my face....very cute!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-06-13 11:16 AM

Totally enjoyed...the rhythm was fun the words a gas, if I find Walt, I'll let him pass.

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2001-06-14 01:54 AM

You are jsut tooooooooo much lol....and hey....I like the new pic

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

6 posted 2001-06-14 08:58 AM

walt you are way out alright but thats what makes your poems so unique and kool

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

7 posted 2001-06-14 04:50 PM

maan, this is crazyfunnycool. i feel for those who underestimate you. you assemble words rather nicely.

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