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Open Poetry #14

One More Day

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-06-15 01:40 AM

One More Day

I so tire of
never mores
and
the sound
of slamming doors

today I wish
for just
one day

one more day of

      kissing sweet lips
      caressing under finger tips
      a long slow dance
      a never ending romance
      one more tear to cry
      another time to hold head high
      someone I’ve lost to again call friend
      a better way to learn to mend
      to hold another nearer to me
      the knowledge to let go, and let things be
      and find tomorrow with a smile
      and remember in loss, all is worthwhile

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

1 posted 2001-06-15 05:16 AM

All good points. I especially like...
and find tomorrow with a smile...

Melton

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2001-06-15 05:36 AM

i must say that I loved this one, very sad yet hopeful, from a realist's point of view with a lighter optimistic side too...I can say that I grew tired of the whole thing long ago and have the same wish, but if it doesn't come true, then it doesn't. Thanks for this one.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-06-15 09:04 AM

Your usual...excellent work.. always a pleasure to read...

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