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Haunting Soul
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Haunting Soul |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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Unable to write I cannot see What it is I see in me Shadow of self Flowering bright Life full of joy Captured a soul That is all my own Calling through echoes Bouncing off signs Two in the same Am I me We I be Angel of depth Purity of self Swirling wonder Beauty in nature Losing a battle Winning a game No one knows A wink, a sigh Hush don't speak Touched forever Fire sparked in wonder Chaos surrounds him Confusion in circles Patterns in whispers Clearly seeking Shadows linger Laying back softly Against the truth All you had hidden Looking deep in you Lost behind Breaking up pieces Holding back pacing Colors struggling Smothered grey Touching the vein A stain which glows In the absence of peace Bottled up in darkness Left behind forgotten |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The epitome of life, indeed! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
The truths in this are deafening. Great write!  All writing comes |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
hey - nice to see you again Good poem hon...  K |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
I loved the poem........speaking of so much......raising so many questions but this line has really caught me "Angel of depth Purity of self" Thank you ************************** It's only me.......only me |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Love the form and flow...but do not fullyunderstand the opening line...for you are quite able to write as proven by the poem itself.. (grinning) |
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