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Julian L. Chester
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since 2001-06-05
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0 posted 2001-06-12 09:53 PM



to look at a women
is to look at a precious fruit.
a fruit of gold
and triumphant wonders.

to have a woman
is to have every assects
of thou fruit.

its more than a bottle of wine.
that bottle of wine holds beautiful shine.
every drop hold a piece of laughter,
every sparkle hold every tear,

every glass hold another life,
every spill holds another pass life.
for every glass of wine,
there should be a hot meal,

to forfill the missing piece,
in your heart,
and in every heart theres a soul.

for every meal to be hot,
there must be a glass a wine,
to share and dine,
to have happiness and joy,

to break that glass
would mean to make the
hot meal cold.

so to end this poem,
i shall keep the
rythm smooth.

and always hold a
confinement of love  

to charish a special day
in my heart and to remember
always how a womens soul
can be remembered.  

© Copyright 2001 Julian L. Chester - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-13 01:01 AM


oh WOW....beautiful.....


Greeneyes~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


Cerenity
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2 posted 2001-06-14 09:04 AM


Hi Julian,

This was wonderful, very much enjoyed,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Watersign6
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3 posted 2001-06-14 09:09 AM


very enjoyable to read  
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4 posted 2001-06-14 09:16 AM


this is realy nice  
Julian L. Chester
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5 posted 2001-06-15 04:17 PM


i like this poem very much also if you would like to check up more read my other poem also on LOVE and many more.
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