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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-06-12 03:20 PM



Legend Of Blue Quartz


It was,
When things were young
Much different than
The circle of today.

Then,
All Spirits and Man
Understood each other

In this time
There was a Woman
Who envied the blue
Of Sky’s world,
And  was lover to Water.

One day,
She spoke to Water
After they had lain together
And asked him to capture
The Blue from Sky
So that she might possess it

Water was smitten
With the softness of this Woman
And so began to enlist Night
In a plan to capture Sky’s Blue.

Early next morning
When Night Usually gives way
To Day and lets Sky show blue
Water was at the edge of the world
Waiting in ambush.

As Day, began his journey
And just as Sky was beginning
To show proudly his Blue
Water Grabbed Blue and
Took it deep within
His land.

Sky turned grey
And began to threaten,
But water lay still and deep.
Sun, seeing what had happened
Joined Sky and put forth a great Light
On Water
In the Depths of Water
One could see the Blue he had Stolen
And The Green of envy that his Woman
Had tainted him with.

Sun and Sky whispered
Then both retreated to the far North
And Water became colder
And colder
Until He was frozen

Sky then sent a lightening being
To strike Water, who groaned and
Through bits of Frozen Blue
Onto Land as Sun reached down
And Grabbed as Much Blue
As he could from Water
And handed back to Sky.

Those frozen bits of Blue
Today are called Blue Quartz
And are honored for holding
The Powers of both Sky and Water.

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Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-06-12 03:32 PM


These are simply amazing, and one day, all of the legends of your pen should hold court between leather, so that they may be carried from generation to generation!
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2 posted 2001-06-12 03:40 PM


I must be following you Lady In White *smiles* I agree, and I loved this one...now I see there old Blue was struck with the envy of green - hmmm - do you possibly suppose that is emerald or is it jade?  We will just have to wait and see now I suppose? Do tell.......

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3 posted 2001-06-12 03:42 PM


Leather... now that is another tale in itself...

Once,
long ago when Man
had stepped out of the Circle
he began to grow hungry
and cold

In his blindness,
(for everyone knows
there is no light
outside the Circle)
He began to Kill

This pleased Destruction
and he taught Man how
to make things from
what he could not eat
of his kills.

Needing Clothes
he asked Destruction
to teach him how
to cover himself

Destruction began
by taking the Skin
and scraping all
that could be eaten
off of it,
then cracked the skull
and rubbed it with Brain

After some time,
this cured and the
results
were Leather

Man has since
tried to step back
into the Circle
but the other Spirits
now afraid of Him
will not speak
directly

And Man...
still sides with
Destruction

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4 posted 2001-06-12 03:46 PM


Now I am very sorry I asked, for I did not know that necessity was part and parcel of destruction....

so I shall just hold your legends in my hands for as long as I may....

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5 posted 2001-06-12 04:00 PM


(chuckling)

As with all legends... they should be taken with a grain of salt..and the mind of the story teller always questioned...

As for Neccessity...

That is another tale in and of itself...


Once long ago
Before Hunger
and Before Man left
the Circle,
A Chief began to envy
the Many colors
the other Spirits
had

He Called a council
and began to plead
with all the Spirits to
share the Colors

The Spirits listened
and then Spoke in One Voice
Man may wed one
of our Daughters
and His Children
will then
possess some Colors.

The Chief Listened,
agreed and then
began to look
at the Spirits Daughters

Sky's Daughters Clouds
Were very beautiful
and the Chief
chose to marry
one of them.

This union in time
produced children
who also possessed Color
and the Chief was Satisfied.

The children, however,
grew restless as time
went on and felt
neither a part of
the Spirit World
or Man

Feeling the need
to belong, They taught
other Men how to Paint themselves
and to steal colors
from the Spirits

Colors are rich things
and addictive
to all but true Spirits
This addiction
became neccessity

and still today
you can see the clouds
in some people's eyes



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6 posted 2001-06-12 04:29 PM


Then it sounds, Sir, as if dreams were born of necessity.....

keep it up.....

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7 posted 2001-06-12 06:12 PM


Is it okay if I tag along on this, I am absolutely in poetic heaven up here?
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8 posted 2001-06-12 08:31 PM


Thanks to Mysteria and Lady in White for prompting such wonderful replies from the captain! what a treat!

*smiles*

~Tier

Martie
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9 posted 2001-06-13 12:22 PM


Cpat Hair..I am amazed at all this word wealth you possess...but I'm sure that is another story..Much enjoyed these...thank you!
Rosebud1229
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10 posted 2001-06-13 12:51 PM


wow, these poems are awesome, thanks so much for sharing.
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11 posted 2001-06-23 09:49 AM


Hasn't Decaflame found this yet?  These are simply amazing...and a wonderful way to start Saturday mornings...with legend and lore....
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12 posted 2001-06-23 10:22 AM


Epic poems, I stand in awe, read in isolation they are wonderful but together they have almost biblical qualities. I enjoyed very much. Thank you.

Regards,
Olias.

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