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Sven
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0 posted 2001-06-12 01:20 PM


I watch you
I see the way
that you move
the way that
you walk

and I stop and
think to myself
just how wonderful
you really are

and you turn
to look at
me,
you smile
and ask me
what I'm thinking

"nothing" I say
as I smile
and kiss you
softly

you smile
and say
"I love you too. . ."

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-12 01:49 PM


Sven, someone is sooooo very lucky to have you. You always know just what to say...and you say it sooo well. I loved this!

Sauni

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I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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2 posted 2001-06-12 01:51 PM


how delightful it is when a loved one deciphers our hidden thoughts!!


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3 posted 2001-06-12 01:51 PM


Very nicely painted... it is the simple things which others who are familiar with us just know... those things we share without words... enjoyed this a great deal



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4 posted 2001-06-12 02:00 PM


and a sweet "nothing" it is too! Or is that sveet?   Enjoyed.  
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5 posted 2001-06-12 03:00 PM


They always know, don't they?  Can't fool 'em for a minit
Excellent write my friend.

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6 posted 2001-06-12 03:08 PM


tender piece within precious love.....excellent as always.

Charisma

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7 posted 2001-06-12 03:09 PM


So sweet and lovely, Sven. It is great to see you this happy!

Corinne

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8 posted 2001-06-12 08:35 PM


Saunni, thank you. . . and I'm glad that you loved this. . .

faterider, yes it is, then it's real. . . thank you my friend. . .

Capt Hair, thank you. . . yes it is the simple things, and when you have those, everything else is easy. . .

serenity,  . . . it's a sweet or sveet as you want it to be. . . thank you. . .

Interloper, they always do. . . even when we don't want them to!!  Thank you. . .

Charisma, thank you my friend. . .  

Corinne, thank you, but, I'm always this happy!!  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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9 posted 2001-06-13 09:19 AM


Gotta love the ones who can feel your minds eye on them!
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10 posted 2001-06-13 09:51 AM


"something"....
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11 posted 2001-06-13 11:50 AM


I like your loving spirit Sven...James
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12 posted 2001-06-13 09:42 PM


I have had these feelings before, lovely arent they...when two are that close to read each others mind or face, or smile.....wonderful...


Lauren~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


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13 posted 2001-06-13 09:48 PM


BeAuTiFuL WriTinG SvEn  
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14 posted 2001-06-14 01:14 AM


sweet...very nice...i enjoyed this greatly...thanks for sharing it...bye sven...

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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15 posted 2001-06-14 01:24 AM


Some poems are pretty.  This is one of those.    Thanks, Sven

Michael

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16 posted 2001-06-14 01:33 AM


Oh this is really sweet Sven  

Maree

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17 posted 2001-06-15 05:22 AM


what a bond
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18 posted 2001-06-15 05:32 AM


Thanks. You've really said "someting". I am lucky, cause I have one just like that.

Melton

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19 posted 2001-06-15 01:20 PM


JLR, yes, you do. . . they're the ones that are keepers. . . thank you. . .

Decaflame, "everything. . . "

James, I know that it's a spirit that we share my friend. . . thank you. . .

Lauren, I knew that you would understand, it's a wonderful feeling isn't it??  Thank you so much. . .

WS6, ThAnK YoU. . .

albert, thank you for reading my friend. . .  

Auguste, pretty is what I was going for with this one. . . thank you. . .

DA, thank you my friend, glad that you enjoyed. . .

ps, everyone can have this kind of bond. . . thank you. . .

Melton, thank you. . .glad that you know as well. . .

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