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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-06-12 12:47 PM


Unearthed

dwell then in thoughts
explore

grip tender then some
evermore

lines are drawn, then
underscored

in truth? I love you
even more

fortunate, this time
has come

dwells our moon in
midnight’s sun

stighnoti, seguires
in rapture,
acquire

truth

inspired

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Secret Whisper
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Through the Looking Glass
1 posted 2001-06-12 12:54 PM


Loved it. What wonderful simplicity.

"We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912)

brian madden
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ireland
2 posted 2001-06-12 01:30 PM


beautiful words

"Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett

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3 posted 2001-06-12 01:49 PM


(clapping)

Wonderful... simple form and flow, but powerful delivery and words... you do amaze me...


Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2001-06-12 03:26 PM


You write very well in this form.  Nicely done.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Poeminister
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5 posted 2001-06-12 03:45 PM


Bonito!  
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2001-06-12 03:51 PM


I’d explore thy mind
Give myself to tender grasp
Imprisoned within
Climb on and I will follow
‘Til we reach the pinnacle

Nathaniel Shain
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7 posted 2001-06-12 05:02 PM


As always...  
Sven
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8 posted 2001-06-12 08:28 PM


well done indeed. . .  

a form that fits you dear Lady. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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