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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-06-12 11:00 AM

Fly

Dove, come then, come,
Seek me in this dawn’s new light
Fly, fly...on wings forged in winter ice
Caress this sigh of me

Seek me in this dawn’s new light
Fly, fly…on wings forged in winter ice
Caress this sigh of me
Allow me then wings of grace

Fly, fly…on wings forged in winter ice
Caress this sigh of me
Allow me then wings of grace
That I may dwell in highest high

Caress this sigh of me
Allow me then wings of grace
That I may dwell in highest high
Dove, come then, come

Fly, fly…on wings forged in winter ice

© Copyright 2001 Decaflame - All Rights Reserved

Secret Whisper
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since 2001-01-25

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Through the Looking Glass

1 posted 2001-06-12 12:20 PM

I truly loved this style of writing. It is something I have never seen before, and I find it quite amusing. Wonderfully written.

"We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912)

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Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-06-12 02:16 PM

Well crafted.

Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2001-06-12 02:25 PM

I like this one very much!

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Paula Finn
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missouri

4 posted 2001-06-12 02:54 PM

This is truly lovely....all from a line...well done

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By the sea

5 posted 2001-06-12 02:58 PM

"on wings forged in winter ice"

What imagery! This is nice.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Poeminister
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Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2001-06-12 02:59 PM

Deca--
Enjoyed the way you wove this. Very nicely done.

Poeminister

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lost in blue pages

7 posted 2001-06-12 03:44 PM

enjoyed the reading very much.

Charisma

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KS

8 posted 2001-06-12 06:53 PM

Oh, yeah...I loved this style, too! Excellently written!

sp

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

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