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vandana
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0 posted 2001-06-12 10:55 AM


As We sat
And heard those words of yesterday,
Those days Of sorrow,
The words of the tommorow,
brings our song to ask,
songs that were asked
by the ears,
That the songs were heard,
songs that
were asked,
Bringing the night
with full of stars,
singing those songs,
When the night Is misty
With the dew of the rose,
The songs that were asked were
pleasure to hear
and even the morning Is here
with the softens of the heart
with the songs
that were asked ,
The songs of love,
The songs of heart and soul,
That were asked by them,
whom wanted to listen
and the days were long,
wanted to listened
the songs
of yesterday that were gone,
Songs that were asked......

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 06-12-2001).]

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Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
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1 posted 2001-06-12 11:54 AM


I love this poem very much! The title is awesome.  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

sans38
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since 2001-03-03
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2 posted 2001-06-13 08:40 AM


Very nice! I loved it!
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-06-14 01:49 AM


VanDana~
This is simply beautiful sweetie.
Very tenderly penned.
Thank you for sharing.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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