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She Was Like The Wind
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She Was Like The Wind |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~*~ She Was Like The Wind ~*~On a summer beach with winds cool and soft, Full moon bright, and heaven’s stars aloft, Two figures play in sand or shadowy grass, A simple young lad and a beautiful lass. This lad sits up and watches the skies. The maiden, sitting in his lap, she sighs, So content with life, they do not see, How very fragile their dear love can be. As into a looking glass through which we see, Looking for a much better image of you or me, This young couple just sits, content and secure, Absorbed in their love so good and so pure. Cool wind so soothing, as they whistle and blow, Leads his hands softly to her lips, as soft as a rose. A gentle caress on the cheek, a look in her eyes, Soon, his arms engulf her, as she delightedly sighs. One kiss on the lips, sweet as honey’s soft dew, To this lad’s soft young mouth this all is quite new. He then softly embraces his beautiful lover, Bending down he kisses her, resting above her. She smiles between kisses, and holds to him fast, For she knows without doubt that this love’s going to last. It’s pure and eternal, it will now know no rest, Then the lad grins back and leans toward her breast. Morning sun begins to rise, shimmering from the east. Two lovers lie, inseparable,warm, reveling in their peace. Two as one, content, in what was shared between them, The lad holds close his love, his lass, his very precious gem. She’s like the wind, a spirit free, who made that lad whole, And like the ocean’s balmy breeze that lass warmed his soul. First love, best love, remembered always, never ends, Those tender moments stolen, for she was like the wind. art: Nadja Bernhardt "Beach Love" music: "She's Like The Wind" ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh, Sharon, sigh, tis a wonderous feeling to remember. That first love that would be eternal...gentle smile..and never end |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* Geesh..Between you and Logan, beaches, dreams, thoughts on love, I think I'm going to be in tears soon. I love this. The music was clearer than any version I've heard of this song too (as far as on the internet) This was beautiful, lady.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Might just soar to the top of my list of yours ! How like the very wind is first love~ Blowing in to capture us in it's breeze~ Teasing ~ Pleasing ~ Returning in gentle flow for all our lives ~ Yes ... I definitely like this one, sweet romantic poet ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Lovely romantic first love experiance.May they hold through every life chapter. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Logan: Yes, wasn't that the best! Temptress: This is indeed a beach evening, as other friends on other sites for some strange reason also wrote of beachs tonight, (3) to be exact. Marge: Oh lady, you do so know how to make something I do actually sound good you know that? Thank you and hugs. First anything is best anything isn't it? thecraig: So glad you like this one. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful romantic poetry! A pleasure to read! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
wow, I really loved this! Kathleen Blake |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Mysteria, This is just beautiful The first love - always remembered in this way Liz |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
a beautiful read  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh*....how beautiful written, this is really one of your best.....enjoyed the read very....very much. Charisma |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very nicely done... first love is indeed special and something we never seem to forget...and while we think it will last forever it is as frafile as delicate china...and once broken can be displayed in memory of what it was..but hardly ever put together again without the cracks showing.. I remember you… How at 14 we fell Through the excitement And pain of being in love. You, seeming much older Than I felt I was, Yet less in pain than I Thought you were. Tenderness and budding bodies Twined together in Clandestine trysts Held for furtive moments The hope of not being Alone forever. Who would have known That some 30 years later, I still remember the way Your smile lit my days? Or that the way you spoke, When you were lost in the lies We told each other, Would haunt still nights? At 14 I fell… Out of the grace of innocence And into love with you. I no longer love you, But the memories of Those days and nights Can make me wish I did. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
WOW! Thank you all, I am thrilled you like this one - hmmm, remember those romantic days do we now? CPhat you know your poem is the best I have ever read on the subject of young love you know that. How very kind of you to post it here for people to read it thank you so very much. I am truly touched by the gesture. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
This was absolutely enachanting and so very beautiful, Sharon. You know me as of lately, the hopeless romantic....this was right up my alley! It brought smiles to my face...and lots of ~*~thoughts~*~ racing through my mind of a special someone I wish I was standing beside right now! Very....VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!! Hugs and smiles to you, always...and much love, dawn |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Dawn: Hey, hey! YOU will be a first love, how about that? Thanks bud. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Lovely...so soft and just...lovely! Thanks for the read Sharon...  K |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Severn: Morning! Have a nice day,and thank you for stopping in before work! |
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