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PoemCrazy
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since 2000-11-30
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0 posted 2001-06-12 12:14 PM


i suppose everyone who does poems tries this at least once.
maybe it fits the "cliche" thing.


love is


an oasis to cool you
when life gets too hot
steamy, dreamy nights
when outside it's not
the softest of hands
to wipe a tear from your cheek
and silent smiling eyes
when it's quiet you seek
all the little things
that weigh more than life
and, if you let it
an end to your strife

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-06-12 08:54 AM


...but it is how you string them together....
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2 posted 2001-06-12 09:10 AM


I do not believe there is anything new...to be written..but new ways to write it...abound....


sans38
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3 posted 2001-06-13 10:53 AM


This was lovely! It touched my romantic heart : )
VAS
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4 posted 2001-06-13 11:12 AM


reading this just plain FELT good!
Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2001-06-13 11:42 AM


Ok I admit, I love it.

Titia

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ethome
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6 posted 2001-06-13 04:13 PM


I agree with sunshine ...you've made them interesting by the way you put them together!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

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