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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-06-11 11:01 PM


She looks longingly out the window
As the waves come rolling in
How trusting and loyal she'd been
Only to find out that he had sinned

Driving along the winding road
The wind in her hair and the soft top down
So happy and so alive did she feel
Her face void of a single frown

She had arrived at the house unexpectedly
Hoping to surprise the love of her life
Oh how the tables were about to turn
How her heart was to be cut like a knife

She surprised them in the heat of passion
As they rolled seductively on the bed
How she stood at the door in disbelief
How much her betrayed heart bled

She had run away blinded by tears
Not wanting to believe what she'd seen
In total horror and disbelief
As she now realised where he'd been

She has returned to this place so unwillingly
To collect her belongings then leave
But she'll gaze out this window one last time
As she remembers this love as she grieves

Suetang

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Dark Angel
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1 posted 2001-06-11 11:14 PM


Oh this is so sad hon.

Maree

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2 posted 2001-06-11 11:15 PM


betrayal is always so painful especially when you are on top of the world when it happens a sad and too often true tail  well written liked it loads
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By the sea
3 posted 2001-06-13 10:49 PM


Oh my...how sad, Sue.  Hope this isn't a true story, my friend.  A good write.

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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4 posted 2001-06-14 08:24 AM


sad.. you can feel the hurt in every verse..

nicely written

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5 posted 2001-06-14 08:28 AM


sad very very sad
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