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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-06-11 10:51 PM


As the sun begins to set
Like a jewel in the crown
We'll admire nature's beauty
While the sun is sinking down

The seabirds fly above us
Gliding effortlessly in one place
How we marvel at their beauty
As they move with majestical grace

Our ship of love sets sail
Under the golden edged sky
How tranquil is this setting
As we begin to drift on by

We'll snuggle up together
As we sit here by the mast
And out into the sunset
Our dreams will soon be cast

So much love there is to be made
In this warming amber glow
As this ship sails across still waters
Where it takes us - heaven knows

Suetang

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zzz
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1 posted 2001-06-11 11:11 PM


lovely peacefull images float across my mind when i read this never is the world so beautiful as when there is some one to share it with
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2 posted 2001-06-13 05:38 PM


oh how beautiful penned and what a lovely flow.....glad that I've found it way back here. so up above  

Charisma

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3 posted 2001-06-13 05:41 PM


Great poem!  Thanks!

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Suetang
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4 posted 2001-06-13 06:02 PM


Thank you all for your comments.  I'm glad you enjoyed this.  Take care......Sue

Suetang

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5 posted 2001-06-13 10:41 PM


This is so pretty and romantic, Sue.  

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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