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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-06-11 10:45 PM


In the early stages of slumber
I lie awake and think of you
You visit me in my dreams
Always brightening up my view

When I need to see your face
I close my eyes and there you are
How vivid is this image
Like a bright and shining star

My heart calls out your name
In the stillness of the night
Hoping my wishes will come true
How I hope with all my might

I cast out my dreams
Into the star studded sky
As I lie here and wait
How much I'm hoping for a reply

My love travels far
On a moonbeam you now appear
I try to reach out and touch you
As your image is so clear

I'm like a sailor adrift on the ocean
On love's vessel I'm drifting to you
Surrounded by love's calming waters
Won't you join me on this boat made for two?

How we'll ride the waves of love
Before we are washed upon the sand
As the suns first rays appear
And I imagine you're here holding my hand

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Mother_Earth
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1 posted 2001-06-12 10:41 PM


Suetang, this is so beautiful!  And the lovely pictures you have painted.  Thank you for sharing.  ME
sans38
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2 posted 2001-06-13 08:46 AM


This was wonderful! I Loved it!!!
Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2001-06-13 08:48 AM


wonderful word picture... and a very enjoyable read..


Suetang
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4 posted 2001-06-13 06:05 PM


Thank you all for your kind words, I'm so glad you liked this one.  Take care....Sue

Suetang

Saunni
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5 posted 2001-06-13 06:49 PM


Simply beautiful! I really loved this!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Secret Whisper
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6 posted 2001-06-13 06:53 PM


How very touching. It makes me long for those night-dreams.

"We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912)

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7 posted 2001-06-13 10:45 PM


Sue, you are definitely a romantic, my friend.     May I borrow your ship sometime?

(((hugs)))
Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Cpat Hair
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8 posted 2001-06-14 08:25 AM


very nice....
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9 posted 2001-06-14 08:27 AM


Beautiful  
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