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For Ethome -Aftermath of a Long Kiss
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For Ethome -Aftermath of a Long Kiss |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Ethome, This doesn't nearly compare in beauty to your wonderful poem. It was only inspired by it. And I wanted you to know how warm and touching it is, a perfect portrait of true love. And so this poem is for you. A thank you for sharing your talents The Aftermath of a Long Kiss What made the oceans spin me to heaven What made the universe swivel around Why is my mind in mists of enchantment Why can’t I touch the solid of ground Quivering wings of little white pigeon Eyes lightly closed like an infant at dawn Motionless body of child in dreamland Throbbing of breast like a trembling young fawn Lips pressed together in moments of splendor Now pulled apart, still the pleasures enfold Eyes gaze at depths in the eyes of another Feeling the pulses of life taking hold Bodies attracted with power of the undertows Kissing induces the wild of desire Impulses of nature, the moontides of rhythm Burn in the flames of a passionate fire When the oceans and universe spin you around The infinite beauty of love has been found Elizabeth Santos |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lips pressed together in moments of splendor Now pulled apart, still the pleasures enfold Eyes gaze at depths in the eyes of another Feeling the pulses of life taking hold Bodies attracted with power of the undertows Kissing induces the wild of desire Impulses of nature, the moontides of rhythm Burn in the flames of a passionate fire ========================== Liz this is wonderfully passionate and romantic... and even more special inspired by a fellow poets work. very nice lip lock LOL well done poetess cadence kiss  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful Liz!  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
so beautiful Liz.....enjoyed every line. Charisma |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Great descriptions of love after a long kiss, indeed. Melton |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
..and thank you once again for sharing your talents, Liz..  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice follow up..... nicely written and nicely conveyed.. enjoyed! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, Lady Santos, he will be so very pleased with this gift from you....it is so wonderful to see inspiration shared on silver platters of friendship... |
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