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Under and Over |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Under the stars Diamonds on velvet Droplets from heaven Dancing reminders I cry... Under your love Umbrella of life Taken from heaven Promised to grow I live... Under and Over Evolve into you Under the tree She reads from me A poem I wrote Under and Over I cry. I live. For passion is life And passion is you Under the moon As she is done Reading from me She looks up to say What could she say? For she is my all My poetry As the stars, the moon And everything under She is my life She is my wonder I hear the delight In the stars In the night I wake up and wonder For she is my all And everything under [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 06-11-2001).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is lovely walty, especially loved these lines..... For passion is life And passion is you For she is my all My poetry lovely m'friend  Maree |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
THAT IS SO BEAUTIFUL. AND BUTTERFLIES SWIRL AROUND IN MY STOMACH TO KNOW THAT SOMEONE LIKE YOU FEELS THAT WAY ABOUT SOMEONE LIKE ME. |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
How absolutely brilliant. It makes me wish I knew a love even half as dear. Bravo. "We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912) |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
 you write so beautiful  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh walt...I've got tears here...this is absolutely stunning and goosebumps too...elisa...I would have this one framed. I can't say enough how much I love this. One of your best, here, walt! GORGEOUS!!!!!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
She is very lucky to have you. This was beautiful, Walt. All writing comes |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I wanna thank you all smiles to e and sen o yuh thank you guys and gals i was deeply inspired E grin. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WELL done. Wonderful thoughts painted upon the canvas of your soul. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Durn computers. Sorry for the duplicate [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-12-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Walt...what a beautiful devotion to your lady.... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
what a wonderful loving image you've painted here.....loved it. Charisma |
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