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theLadypoet
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since 2001-05-28
Posts 97
Or USA

0 posted 2001-06-11 05:44 PM



Hours rise up and pop
like the fuzzy bubbles of
newly-poured cola.
One minute, life-defining,
the next - pretty air
that tickles the nose.

© Copyright 2001 Sherry Asbury - All Rights Reserved
Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
1 posted 2001-06-11 07:07 PM


I like this.  Nicely said.


Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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since 2001-06-02
Posts 190

2 posted 2001-06-11 07:53 PM


I liked this lady,
I could get real deep into this if I tried.
Thank you
Mr»ÄlleÿÇät


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